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- Introduced comprehensive design documentation and JSON configurations for multiple design systems, including Agentic, Airtable, Ant, Apple, Application, Arc, and Artistic. - Each design system includes detailed guidelines on visual themes, color palettes, typography, spacing, layout, components, and interaction principles. - Enhanced the overall design framework to support diverse user interfaces and improve consistency across applications. This update significantly enriches the design resources available for developers, enabling them to create visually cohesive and user-friendly applications.
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671 lines
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<body>
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<div class="wrap">
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<!-- ============ Header ============ -->
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<header class="hd">
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<div>
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<div class="hd-meta">
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<span>5-Dim Critique</span>
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<span>·</span>
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<span>2026.04.27</span>
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<span>·</span>
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<span>OD · Critique skill</span>
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</div>
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<h1 class="hd-title">magazine-web-ppt<br>example deck</h1>
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</div>
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<p class="hd-verdict">
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<strong>7.4 / 10 overall.</strong> Strong philosophical
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backbone and detail — the deck looks like one designer made
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every slide. Innovation is conservative on purpose; functionality
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loses points only because the example ships without real images.
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</p>
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</header>
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<!-- ============ Radar + Score table ============ -->
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<section class="top">
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<div class="radar-card">
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<div class="lbl">Score Radar</div>
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<!-- Center 150,150. Radius 110 = 10/10. -->
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<!-- Grid rings 25/50/75/100% of 110 = 27.5 / 55 / 82.5 / 110 -->
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<!-- Pentagon angles: -90, -18, 54, 126, 198 (deg) measured from center.
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Order: top=Philosophy, top-right=Hierarchy, bottom-right=Detail,
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bottom-left=Function, top-left=Innovation -->
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<line class="axis" x1="150" y1="150" x2="45.34" y2="116.05" />
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<!-- Score area · Phil 8 / Hier 7 / Det 8 / Func 6 / Innov 5
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Distances from center (radius 110):
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Phil 8 → 88 : 150, 150 - 88 = 150, 62
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Hier 7 → 77 : 150 + 77*sin(72°), 150 - 77*cos(72°)
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≈ 150 + 73.24, 150 - 23.79
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= 223.24, 126.21
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Det 8 → 88 : 150 + 88*sin(144°), 150 - 88*cos(144°)
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≈ 150 + 51.72, 150 + 71.20
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= 201.72, 221.20
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Func 6 → 66 : 150 - 66*sin(36°), 150 + 66*cos(36°)
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≈ 150 - 38.79, 150 + 53.40
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= 111.21, 203.40
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Innov 5 → 55 : 150 - 55*sin(108°),150 - 55*cos(108°)
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≈ 150 - 52.32, 150 + 17.00
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= 97.68, 167.00
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Wait - cos(108°) is negative, so 150 - 55*(-0.309) = 150 + 17, that's bottom of axis. But Innov axis is top-left. Let me redo.
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Innov axis end point: 45.34, 116.05. Vector from center (150,150): (-104.66, -33.95), magnitude 110.
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At score 5, scale = 5/10 = 0.5: center + 0.5 * (-104.66, -33.95) = 150 - 52.33, 150 - 16.97 = 97.67, 133.03 -->
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<!-- Axis labels -->
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<text class="lbl" x="150" y="28" text-anchor="middle">PHILOSOPHY</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="150" y="14" text-anchor="middle">8</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="270" y="116" text-anchor="middle">HIERARCHY</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="278" y="100" text-anchor="middle">7</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="220" y="259" text-anchor="middle">DETAIL</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="220" y="275" text-anchor="middle">8</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="80" y="259" text-anchor="middle">FUNCTION</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="80" y="275" text-anchor="middle">6</text>
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<text class="lbl" x="30" y="116" text-anchor="middle">INNOVATION</text>
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<text class="lbl-n" x="22" y="100" text-anchor="middle">5</text>
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<div class="overall">Overall · <span class="n">7.4</span> / 10 · band <em>Strong</em></div>
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</div>
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<div class="scores" aria-label="Score breakdown">
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">Philosophy consistency<span class="en">Phil. cons.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">Visual hierarchy<span class="en">Hier.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:70%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">Detail execution<span class="en">Detail</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:80%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-strong">Strong</div>
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</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">Functionality<span class="en">Func.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:60%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
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</div>
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<div class="score-row">
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<div class="score-name">Innovation<span class="en">Innov.</span></div>
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<div class="score-bar"><span class="score-bar-fill" style="width:50%"></span></div>
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<div class="score-num">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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<div class="score-band band-functional">Functional</div>
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</div>
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</div>
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</section>
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<h2 class="section-title">Dimension reports<span class="en">Evidence per axis</span></h2>
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<div class="dim-grid">
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<article class="dim">
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<div class="dim-head">
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<div class="dim-name">Philosophy consistency<span class="en">Phil. cons. · 哲学一致性</span></div>
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<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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</div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
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The 9-slide rhythm reads as a single direction (Monocle Editorial)
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from cover to close. <code>chrome</code> vocabulary stays in one
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register: <em>"A Talk · 2026.04.22"</em>, <em>"Act II · 04 / 09"</em>,
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<em>"Page 06 · 金句"</em>. The drift is the <code>kicker</code> on
|
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slide 5 — <em>"Act II"</em> is good, but the slide title <em>"折叠"</em>
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is a one-character display word that competes with the Act number for
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eyeballs. Worth tightening.
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</p>
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<div class="dim-tags">
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The chrome / kicker / foot vocabulary across all 9 slides — it's the deck's identity.</span></div>
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<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 5: bump the kicker to <em>"Act II · 折叠"</em> or shrink the display title to clear the hierarchy.</span></div>
|
||
</div>
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||
</article>
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<article class="dim">
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<div class="dim-head">
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<div class="dim-name">Visual hierarchy<span class="en">Hier. · 视觉层级</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">7<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
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||
</div>
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<p class="dim-evidence">
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Hero pages (1, 5, 7, 9) are textbook — display serif dominates,
|
||
<code>kicker</code> and <code>meta-row</code> recede. Body pages
|
||
mostly hold up: stat-cards on slide 2 use <code>.stat-label</code>
|
||
(mono small) → <code>.stat-nb</code> (serif large) → <code>.stat-note</code>
|
||
(sans body), three tiers, no collision. The miss is slide 3's
|
||
<code>callout</code> — its left-rule competes visually with the
|
||
<code>.h-xl</code> heading because both sit at the same x-coord
|
||
and similar weight. Eye doesn't know if to read heading-first or
|
||
quote-first.
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>Stat-card 3-tier structure on slide 2 — copy this everywhere.</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 3: indent the <code>callout</code> by <code>2vw</code> or push it below the lead so it visibly belongs to a lower tier.</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
|
||
<article class="dim">
|
||
<div class="dim-head">
|
||
<div class="dim-name">Detail execution<span class="en">Detail · 细节执行</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">8<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
<p class="dim-evidence">
|
||
Magazine-grade in places — every <code>.foot</code> aligns
|
||
baseline-to-baseline across all 9 slides; <code>.meta-row</code>
|
||
uses one mono spec throughout (<code>.16em</code> tracking,
|
||
uppercase). Pipeline on slide 4 keeps perfect grid even when
|
||
column count drops to 3. Two real misses: (1) Slide 3 image-slot
|
||
uses <code>aspect-ratio:16/10</code> but the placeholder text
|
||
inside is centered which makes it look hollow at viewport widths
|
||
≤ 1100px; (2) the dot-nav at the bottom overlaps the foot text
|
||
on slide 5 because the hero centered grid eats vertical space.
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The mono <code>.foot</code> spec — it's the deck's grace note, do not change letter-spacing.</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Slide 5 hero grid: cap inner content at <code>min-height:78vh</code> so the foot stays clear of the dot-nav.</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
|
||
<article class="dim">
|
||
<div class="dim-head">
|
||
<div class="dim-name">Functionality<span class="en">Func. · 功能性</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">6<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
<p class="dim-evidence">
|
||
Keyboard / wheel / touch navigation works correctly inside the
|
||
host iframe (verified: ←/→/PageUp/PageDown all advance). ESC
|
||
opens the index overview, dot clicks register. Big miss is the
|
||
example ships <em>without real images</em> — slide 3 shows a
|
||
dashed <code>.img-slot</code> placeholder where a product
|
||
screenshot belongs, which is the right call for an example file
|
||
but means the user can't judge how the layout holds at full
|
||
fidelity. Second miss: <code>iframe</code> sandbox is
|
||
<code>allow-scripts</code> only in the example card, so the
|
||
WebGL background loads but the dot-nav inside the iframe takes
|
||
a click before keyboard nav captures focus.
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The 5-bug-fix nav script (real scroller detection, capture-phase listeners) — proven and stable.</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-fix">Fix</span><span>Add a <code>data:</code> URI placeholder image (1×1 colored gradient) in the example so slide 3's layout reads at any width.</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
|
||
<article class="dim">
|
||
<div class="dim-head">
|
||
<div class="dim-name">Innovation<span class="en">Innov. · 创新性</span></div>
|
||
<div class="dim-score">5<span class="denom">/10</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
<p class="dim-evidence">
|
||
Innovation is intentionally conservative — this is a port of
|
||
歸藏's guizang-ppt-skill, and the value proposition is
|
||
<em>predictability</em>, not novelty. The dual WebGL background
|
||
(Holographic Dispersion on dark, Spiral Vortex on light) is the
|
||
one earned moment; the cross-fade on slide-theme transitions is
|
||
subtle and well-timed. But everything else (layout vocabulary,
|
||
chrome / foot pattern, theme presets) is faithfully replicated
|
||
from the upstream. There is no "lean-forward" surprise that
|
||
makes a viewer screenshot a slide. For its declared purpose
|
||
(Monocle Editorial direction), this is appropriate. For an
|
||
AI demo-day deck, it's a missed opportunity.
|
||
</p>
|
||
<div class="dim-tags">
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-keep">Keep</span><span>The dual-shader cross-fade — it's the only "magic" the deck performs and it earns its keep.</span></div>
|
||
<div class="tag-row"><span class="tag tag-qw">Quick win</span><span>Add one <em>typographic</em> moment per deck — e.g. an oversized italic <code>em</code> kicker that breaks the grid on the closing slide.</span></div>
|
||
</div>
|
||
</article>
|
||
</div>
|
||
|
||
<!-- ============ Action lists ============ -->
|
||
<h2 class="section-title">Action lists<span class="en">Keep · Fix · Quick wins</span></h2>
|
||
|
||
<div class="lists-grid">
|
||
<section class="list-card">
|
||
<div class="list-head keep"><span>Keep</span><span class="ct">don't break it</span></div>
|
||
<ul>
|
||
<li>The 9-page rhythm: <code>hero dark → light → dark → light → hero light → dark → hero dark → light → hero light</code>. It's the gold standard.</li>
|
||
<li>Dual WebGL backdrops + the <code>1.2s</code> cross-fade between dark and light slides.</li>
|
||
<li><code>chrome</code> / <code>kicker</code> / <code>foot</code> vocabulary — they carry the Monocle direction.</li>
|
||
<li>3-tier <code>stat-card</code> on slide 2 (<code>label</code> → <code>nb</code> → <code>note</code>).</li>
|
||
</ul>
|
||
</section>
|
||
|
||
<section class="list-card">
|
||
<div class="list-head fix"><span>Fix</span><span class="ct">P0 — visually expensive</span></div>
|
||
<ul>
|
||
<li>Slide 3 callout indent — currently competes with <code>.h-xl</code>; push 2vw right or below the lead.</li>
|
||
<li>Slide 5 hero centered grid — cap content height at <code>78vh</code> so foot doesn't overlap the dot nav.</li>
|
||
<li>Slide 3 add a <code>data:</code> gradient placeholder image so the layout reads at narrow widths even without real assets.</li>
|
||
<li>Slide 5 kicker / display: pick one to be primary — currently both fight.</li>
|
||
</ul>
|
||
</section>
|
||
|
||
<section class="list-card">
|
||
<div class="list-head qw"><span>Quick wins</span><span class="ct">5–15 min, high signal</span></div>
|
||
<ul>
|
||
<li>Inject <code>data-screen-label</code> on every slide for accessibility + grep self-checks.</li>
|
||
<li>Add one oversized italic <em>en</em> moment on the closing slide for typographic surprise.</li>
|
||
<li>Move the <code>#hint</code> overlay from <code>opacity:.4</code> to <code>.55</code> on hero pages — currently invisible.</li>
|
||
<li>Add a print stylesheet (one slide per page) so PDF export carries the rhythm.</li>
|
||
</ul>
|
||
</section>
|
||
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|
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